by erossmantic
Great writing and sequel. The dream is imaginative. Looking forward to what's next.
Very erotic and interesting. I like that she is not doing this against her will as in so many mind control stories. I do think your use of "gawd" is a bit repetitive and should be curbed. All in all good start!
Great sequel - lots of imagination. Like the first one - watch your people.....why would Candace blurt out...... "I need a new place to live," Candace suddenly blurted, as if the thoughts were hers. "What about here?" Cant wait for the next chapter....