All Comments on 'The Tea Master Ch. 02'

by erossmantic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Looking forward to more

Great sequel - lots of imagination. Like the first one - watch your people.....why would Candace blurt out...... "I need a new place to live," Candace suddenly blurted, as if the thoughts were hers. "What about here?" Cant wait for the next chapter....

ale1975ale1975over 7 years ago
Enjoyable story!

Very erotic and interesting. I like that she is not doing this against her will as in so many mind control stories. I do think your use of "gawd" is a bit repetitive and should be curbed. All in all good start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More Please

Great concept and possibilities with the tea shop. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Sequel

Great writing and sequel. The dream is imaginative. Looking forward to what's next.

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