All Comments on 'The Tease: Story One Rewrite'

Well done! Perfectly paced and classy trampiness. Erotic fantasy fulfillment.

Now that's the ending ths story deserved, thank you Greyman01!

When I initially read this revised version I wondered again if it could have taken them further, but on reflection I think it was the perfect release for the sexual tension that had been building between them, more of their encounters might make another explosive story but this was a great climax to this particular tale.

Pleae keep up the great work!