All Comments on 'The Third Begining'

by Villan2242

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GreyMatter46GreyMatter467 months ago

This is certainly only part one? You caught her inner conflict and rising libido expertly.

Bargyn1Bargyn17 months ago

Excellent start to an ongoin series I hope.

lyddenlydden7 months ago

Great story , keep it going...

AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo7 months ago
So tender

Absolutely beautiful. Captures so many desires and emotions in a vulnerable lady. Lisi masterfully transitioned from covert to overt with style and grace.

bluemoves01bluemoves017 months ago

Loved the story, well written. Aldeborough is an expensive place to live. Lot's of nic places in Suffolk, I live there.

oldtwitoldtwit6 months ago

Nicely described, nice character set

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Welcome. New to story writing. Constructive feedback is welcome. My latest series, which I have been writing for the past five years is about a 50-year-old widow, Eliza who has some amazing sexual experiences, staggering life-changing times and a mind blowing inheritace.. ...