All Comments on 'The Third Begining'

by Villan2242

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oldtwitoldtwit6 months ago

Nicely described, nice character set

bluemoves01bluemoves017 months ago

Loved the story, well written. Aldeborough is an expensive place to live. Lot's of nic places in Suffolk, I live there.

AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo7 months ago
So tender

Absolutely beautiful. Captures so many desires and emotions in a vulnerable lady. Lisi masterfully transitioned from covert to overt with style and grace.

lyddenlydden7 months ago

Great story , keep it going...

Bargyn1Bargyn18 months ago

Excellent start to an ongoin series I hope.

GreyMatter46GreyMatter468 months ago

This is certainly only part one? You caught her inner conflict and rising libido expertly.

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Welcome. New to story writing. Constructive feedback is welcome. My latest series, which I have been writing for the past five years is about a 50-year-old widow, Eliza who has some amazing sexual experiences, staggering life-changing times and a mind blowing inheritace.. ...