I have no understanding of this tale. It is so different from the other stories of yours that I have read. I wish there was some effort to bring a focus on why this was happening and how the event began and will end.
I've been a technical writer most of my life and now I dabble in erotica. I like doing landscape drawings in pen and ink and I sometimes try to draw nudity. I can't believe my sexual career is over yet. I welcome correspondence from anyone who finds my works or Forum posting...