All Comments on 'The True Love's Arrow Ch. 02'

Yep, you have found some readers out here are there to find fault with your writing. Me, I enjoy the fiction and writing styles. I enjoyed this installment and look forward to more. Keep writing for yourself and you will always be happy. Thanks for your time and imagination.

There is a whole conversation between the 2 women about not wearing panties to the date. Then the opening of their fucking starts with her in a thong and him slipping his fingers under the waistband of her panties. It just takes away from the flow in my head when there is conflicting info. A little OCD I guess. But the story is still pretty good.