All Comments on 'The Twins Weave Book 02 Ch. 08'

I hope you don't turn him into a full elf, keep him unique. And don't turn any of his women stronger than him, he has seen that stuff till he got power. Anyways, good story as usual I hope you bring out new parts for this series more often.

I am finding difficulties in keeping the plot here, aspects are getting to a tangled rambling state. While it remain clear in the authors mind, it is not being well translated to the page me thinks.

Love the story so far. my thoughts. 1) maybe too many in the harem. 2) Abi should figure out how to be the second most powerful overall. 3) have him figure out how to build an artificial human power pool into the ring.