All Comments on 'The Underclassman Ch. 16'

Ease up on the use of the thesaurus.

The word choices over the last few chapters have made the story more difficult to read which in turn makes them less enjoyable.

As the earlier comments suggested, stick to the basics and ease up on the thesaurus. Your earlier chapters were great and the story still has a strong foundation but it needs to be easy to read and understand.

Why does it sound like it was written by a time traveling monk from the 15th century?

Hahaha

You're losing a star for any chapter you use inappropriate words or words I need to look up. The first two comments were spot on. Please lose your thesaurus.

This reads like an old timey southern man learnt English from a 15th century gentleman