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All Comments on 'The Unlikely Hero Pt. 01'

by LoretharCresthaven

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Should OF never......jfc

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Terrible grammar, random capitalisation. Had to stop reading.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Forget Spell check. Try proof reading ?

Form instead of from !

two not to,

just a couple of the wrong words found.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It was perfect. I wanna read more!

Wolf_hydraWolf_hydra4 months ago

We definitely need more chapters. Keep up the good work

WoodwiseWoodwise2 months ago

I do hope we get more chapters of the filthy little butt slut :)

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