All Comments on 'The Unwilling Neighbour Ch. 02'

by MrXYZ

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EdthegentEdthegentabout 3 years ago

Amazing! Love this, can't wait for the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The most amazing story I have ever read. Literally edged myself all the way through. Time to fuck the wife silly

BigHungryBoyBigHungryBoyabout 3 years ago

Amazing, can't wait to see more of the corruption of Anna. Maybe it will affect her mom or her friends .. who knows? I edged myself during the entire chapter , it was so good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Best story I have read on this site!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Very good hope there's at least one more chapter

Eddie955Eddie955about 3 years ago

Story was fucking great can't wait to read more of it

artty67artty67about 3 years ago

Very enjoyable just make sure the punishment really is a punishment. I really hate it when the girls start enjoying being spanked.

Keep writing your very good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

whens the next part coming out? eagerly waiting

Azrael1801Azrael1801almost 3 years ago

Please don't stop. Cant wait for your next episode

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very nice story! Well done.

EdthegentEdthegentalmost 3 years ago

Loving this series, hoping for more and pushing more of her boundaries. I like the reluctance she has to him still and hope that continues.

Eddie955Eddie955over 2 years ago

great waiting on the next part great writing skills

MrXYZMrXYZabout 2 years agoAuthor

Hi everyone,

Thanks a heaps for your support and feedback.

For those asking: yes there is most defiantly going to be a part 3!

I've been chipping away at it since publishing Chapter 2 but a bunch of external factors mean I don't often get to spend much time on it.

However, I'm pleased to say that I'm (finally) nearing the end of the next chapter - so hopefully it won't be too much longer before Anna's story continues.

Thanks again

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very hot! My only criticism is that there's no mention of him licking or sucking her clit when he went down on her. A woman wouldn't be able to orgasm from just having her vagina tongued. Other than that, it was brilliant!

DoctimeDoctime11 months ago

Passion, raw fucklng passion. And a delicious amount of oral sex. And for me…..wonderful memories! However don’t forget that clit.

Mavuk1Mavuk18 months ago

5 Stars from me! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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