All Comments on 'The Vampire Curse'

That was a great little story, thank you

Nice one, great build up, dealing with cravings. All good!

5 Star. Extremely good story! Now that she's no longer a virgin what more sexual adventures will they have?

short and sweet! Love this story!

Fun story-- well written and every young man's dream.

I hope that Jimmy realizes that Ari was wanting to have a relationship with him as well as the sex too. I had to take points off for leaving out that detail. Even if you had them dating for several weeks before deciding to break up, it would have been a better ending than you gave us. With your ending, I can easily see Jimmy being a total jerk and never trying to date Ari at all, breaking her heart. Just two or three more sentences to affirm that they become a dating couple would have been nice.

This is great,I really want to see a follow-up to this, please consider