All Comments on 'The Vibrator Mishap'

A very lovely interlude. I enjoyed it a great deal.

There is no excuse whatsoever for so many spelling mistakes. Get an editor, or least someone with a modicum of education, to check your work. Here's a tip; before submitting it read your story out loud and you'll hear all your mistakes before other people get a chance to see them.

The story? Fair to middling, nothing special.

Good first story

I liked the storyline but as one of the Anon readers commented it needs a little polishing to improve it. That said, I found the subject very satisfying and loved that they both ultimately got to their destinations of having great sex together even if it was 20 years too late

Loved it. Ignore the negative people and keep writing.

I enjoyed the subject manner and the way you presented the "quick" story. I agree you'd benefit from an editor, which is the only reason I gave 4 vs. 5 stars. Look forward to seeing more.

good read .........thanks

You do have a new toy. You won't have to put him in hot water to make it feel more real. He's hot already

The best lovers are always best friends.

This ‘friend zone’ crap is just BS. Having a friend is always good.