All Comments on 'The View From the 23rd Floor Pt. 04'

Loving this story, just surprised that Audrie isn't a bit more dominant with him in private, as a few times Danni has called her mistress but nothing has come of it, even though Danni has admitted he/she is submissive. They have also never played really with that side of the relationship, and Audrie has never tried to use either toys or a strap on on Danni, even to the point of using a vibrator against his cock gage as a wicked tease.

But hey as I say it is you the author who is writing the story so you should just take it in the direction you want, and I will be happy just to keep reading it.

Rgds Al

Spicy

Why are chapters out of order???

This is a really well written story.

It is fabulous and I love it. I like the aspect that it is a loving relationship without the common S&M, torture and humiliation most often seen in similar type stories. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Best Regards

Veronica

There was a minor correction made to Part 2, which caused it to be reposted.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. I like how the mild and sweet Dom / sub relationship between them progresses.

Really good but one thing bothers me every time it happens. Who would put the cage on over a sticky cum covered cock instead of washing up first? No mention of cleaning up before caging.