All Comments on 'The Villainess Big Hit'

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Satyam4005Satyam40052 months ago

The only feedback i can give is...."just bring more parts of this one as well like layla"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Nice!

AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

Very kinky. I do wish we saw more of the walls in his mind crumbling and shifting. The sense of justice transformed as opposed to suppressed. The polarization of resistant subjects - while important in letting a hero 'bounce back' - skips a lot of the fun steps in brainwashing. We don't see the flaws the villain is taking advantage of, where their power finds purchase. Tis my main hitch with superhero mind-control. It typically circles back to making ex-machina drones. Makes the hero's sense of purpose seem untouchable.

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