All Comments on 'The Vine Mother'

Was a wonderful story.

Feels rushed. Missing details. Didn't know the MC had a cock until halfway through. I understand through the tags at the end that it's ungendered pov but who's meant to know that in the beginning. Lacks descriptors. Get to your goal slower. Describe the body more. Describe the plant girl more. Her vines were where? Part of her legs? Unseen? Fingers? We can't read your mind. You need to bring it out and throw it on the paper so to speak. You've got the gist but it feels more of a draft than fully fledged. You can write indeed. Just take your time and set and flesh the story out more.

@jalford764

I see what you mean and I agree. I am still getting used to putting mind to text and appreciate the feedback.