All Comments on 'The Visit'

I really liked this story. The way he made her feel as if he were doing something he really wasn't. The way you described how the brush felt against her skin and how she perceived it, but in reality how it really was, I found delicious.

how did you make a shower in a hall,, that was great plan ,, learn each and every day , the journey is ongoing

I do so hope there's a sequel in the works. The possibilities are endless, and given the chemistry of the characters, could be quite memorable as well.

Here's hoping the particular muse whom you found inspiring makes a return and offers another tantalizing bite for those of us hanging on the edge.

Fine work.

I am only, well, sixteen years late to this party. This story made me feel the butterflies of a first meetup, the nervousness around the first restraints, the warmth of the first welcome. Beautifully written; I hope you will tell more stories again.