All Comments on 'The Visitor Ch. 03'

fucking, sucking and etc, were very well done. I voted the story a 5 because, obviously, some people voted too low for the earlier chapters of this tale. BUT, what ever happened to the story of Buddy's wife?

And there seems to be something, a large amount of never explained hostility, in our narrator's calling out to Buddy. After three chapters, I do believe we deserve to hear a bit about what this is all about.....the relationships and conflicts between these characters that exists and is going on behind the scenes. If we had that, this story would deserve the 5 I gave it; you write sex with verve and excitement.

and where do we go from here. TK U MLJ LV NV

Other than reading like a chronicle, it was hot.

The man must love eating pussy, and he done a very good job of it.

Thanks for the read