All Comments on 'The Visitor No. 01: Heather'

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darkvision29darkvision29almost 2 years ago

Well done, I would like to hear about more of her adventures.

FairGuyFairGuyalmost 2 years ago

I loved this story!!! Please share more...

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 2 years ago

A real story with really hot details and feeling. Thank you. Looking forward to more.

RFFASTRFFASTalmost 2 years ago

It is a joy to read true experiences, please work on your other times.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good writing, most believable for an emerging girl in the 70's. Settings and side stories were nicely done. Can't wait for chapter 2.

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Would love feedback on my stories. I'd love to correspond with men and women who share my interests. Also, I appreciate advice and suggestions from readers and other writers. I have also written a few request stories for people and found it a thrill.