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All Comments on 'The Voyage'

by LovingF

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pepepilotpepepilot3 months ago

The story isn't bad, but the writing is. Misspellings, wrong (or no) punctuation and very rough sentences. Sorry, I couldn't get very far.

DessertmanDessertman3 months ago

Very amateurish writing with numerous errors.

So only 2 stars.

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