by Swing13
Good premise.
But Sue's lack of direct involvement was a downer.
At least if she'd known he/they were warching her, she could have put on a show for him/them, playing with her tits and pussy, and have indicated that she was ready to go further.
And where was the husband?
And his wife certainly could have asked him to describe what Sue was doing while she jerked him off.
Three stars.
Three stars.
Small town life
There's an infinity of life confined into small town worlds, and people watching people is one of the oldest games in the book. Sweet.
Loved it. The problem with true stories is you’re reluctant to embellish them, but a second chapter could be a fantasy follow up to a true start, and this tale would take that happily.
Hey anonymous,
Why don't you fucking sign up so that the author can address your idiotic comments.
OR, why don't YOU try writing something?
Good story!
5 stars
5 stars