All Comments on 'The Watch'

Too short. Keep it going.

I absolutely love the story line and the concept of being able to stop time. I sure hope you add another chapter or two and we can see where the story goes from here

Fuck I was really expecting him to be caught fucking her in front of 200 people especially when he hinted at her being wet recently

You didn't make a novel out of it.. (I dislike ones that are real long). You finished a thought and it took one page. It was fine for me. I hope you do more with "The Watch". And it is fine to make each story only one happening long. Makes it like an old Saturday movie serial.