All Comments on 'The Watcher'

by Paris Waterman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good

I liked it, and look forward to part two. I would prefer you avoid the homosexual rape as it's a turn off for me, but the rest is all good. Shame men are mostly hardwired in their sexual preference. I enjoy your stories and gave this a five.

shiannshiannover 11 years ago
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wow great story so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome start!

I was so sad the rest of this series wasn't up yet. It really left me wanting more and unlike the previous commenter I would love to see homosexual rape, especially in this situation! Can't wait for the rest!

SabineGrahamSabineGrahamover 11 years ago
Fantastic!

Awesome story, sad there isn't more posted yet!! I can't wait to see them both forced to fuck him; please do have Walt forced to as well; I mean, it's only fair! I will be looking forward to more of this story, hopefully soon!

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