All Comments on 'The Weekend Pt. 03'

Excellent

Wonderful. Thank you. 5*

Is this the end to the story of Barny and Lola? Let us hope not! This third chapter only whets the appetite of the reader for more. There is a wonderful exploration of the development of their relationship in Chapter 3, and the love scenes are well written, although far too brief, so much so that they almost seem to be rushed. More chapters in this story would certainly be welcome.