The Whipped Heiress Ch. 04

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And when she directed the concentrated spray directly at my pink slit, my tender pubic lips were separated and held open by the force of the blast. I whimpered and cried out as my sensitive labia were harshly abused, but Irini kept right on abusing them.

Finally, Demi ordered me to turn around and face the concrete wall, standing with my legs far apart, bent over at the waist and with my hands pressed up against the wall. Irini then aimed her hose at my poor, stinging ass and sprayed me mercilessly, not missing a single inch of my naked skin, I cried and sobbed when she aimed the cold, punishing spray directly at my anus and tender pubic lips.

When it was over, Irini turned off the water, but I was still sobbing. I was cold, dripping wet, the most intimate, erotic parts of my anatomy were a riot of pain, and I couldn't stop the shuddering sobs of agony.

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maddictmaddict8 months ago

Shocking.

50 lashes with couple of big "O"s

I don't think Heather and I can take much more. There doesn't seem to be any end

Prof_MasterProf_Masterover 1 year ago

A minor point of preference: There has been reference to male slaves, but we don't see them. I mean, I understand the audience here and all, but I'd like to have them depicted, if only for spice and local color.

Prof_MasterProf_Masterover 1 year ago

Fantastic! The whipping scene is masterful on so many levels: breathless pacing, vivid writing, seriously hot depiction of H's internal state and experience of the humiliation, arousal and pain ...and most of all, the exploration of H learning the lesson of arousal as "coping" with pain, the eroticization of suffering and submission. That's an achievement we find so rarely on this site.

That scene was so good in fact, the university scene that followed was anticlimactic. I would have favored ending this chapter after the whipping. A small quibble tho. Brilliant, Allison.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story. I am interested what happens to Heather when the 6 months are up. Not sure if a minor infraction can add time to the contract. Or her mother comes looking for Heather and makes a deal to get Heather released.

BTW at the end of this chapter how many more weeks are left under Heather's contract. 6 months do seems long for Heather's owner to stay. C a n Heather be sold and is a new contract needed?

AviciaAviciaabout 2 years ago

After reading the extension from 7 to 60 days I went to the end to check the last page. I won’t read beyond part 1 until I know there is a happy ending with our hapless heiress safely home. The lack of care or aftercare in your stories in deeply concerning. What Alex and Heather’s mother/maid do when she effectively disappeared / call the police?

allison22allison22about 2 years agoAuthor

I've been working on writing a new chapter, but my life has been chaotic and stressful of late. It's hard to find time these days to be creative. Rest assured, I am working on a new chapter...it just may take a while to finish writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

this is a great series i hope to see more form it soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great series so far, but nothing lately! Has allison22 deserted us?

beth_beth_over 2 years ago

I've been enjoying this story much as I did the previous one, and love the way you've been creating some of the peripheral characters. Two in particular stood out ... I'm one of those who will very much enjoy Irini learning some humility, should that happen. And I also found Blake's interactions with Heather to be well done; as harsh as the whipping was it somehow didn't feel gratuitously cruel, quite the opposite, thanks to Blake.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very nice. I hope we'll get to read about Irini's comeuppance...?

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