All Comments on 'The Whoremaker Ch. 04'

I want the next episode!

The story has promise but things need to start progressing at a faster pace and like others have commented the chapters need to be longer.

I am really liking this story so far. I'm not much into the incest part, but I loved the bus scene and having the girl come to his school is a great touch. Don't be afraid to write up longer chapters though.

UGHHHH! I love the story, but it is a bit of a tease. I mean you get me all hot and bothered, I am on edge, waiting for a climax and it just ends. Please write more, but longer, more than just foreplay, need to finish.