The Widow's Gift Pt. 08

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"We need to take-off soon, okay?" The enchanting nymphet crooned sweetly as she opened the cockpit door for the entranced aviators to shuffle inside, pitched tents leading the way like divining rods. "Just as soon as Daddy is finished punishing Mommy for her cheeky behavior. I wish it was me but I'm still learning, you know?"

"Yes, Mistress..." They droned in unison, filing into their flight seats and commencing pre-flight checks like a pair of glassy-eyed robots. "Anything you wish."

"That's so fucking hot!" She squirmed and giggled, running her hands up and down her sensational body, and rubbing at the mark on her neck. "I'm going to love my new life in Russia with Mommy and Daddy, I just know it! We're gunning to achieve some unbelievable stuff. It's going to be amazing."

"Yes, Mistress..."

Back in the passenger cabin Levi took a heated moment to close and seal the passenger door before throwing Alina face first over a beige leather sofa. Using his clawed fingertips, he shredded the expensive dress from the small of her arched back down to her spreading knees and tore her shoestring thong off her lush wiggling hips.

"Get this plane moving!" He roared over her exhilarated gasps. "I'm going to fuck my future wife into the mile high club, then we'll see about the rest of you after that."

"Yes, Darling, yes! Take me however you want. Be rough with me, Master and pound my naughty wife pussy until I scream!"

The landing tires squeaked on the cement as the sleek aircraft rolled into motion, slowly picking up speed as it taxied out onto the private runway.

From inside the cabin came the ecstatic cries of a once lost little girl; now a beautiful, broken woman who had finally found her Lion and was headed home at long last.

A wayward child returning to the cold embrace of Mother Russia; who had no idea how badly she was about to be fucked.

Alina's passionate wails of purest love and carnal devotion nearly drowned out the blaring jet engines as they took flight.

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THE END

Author's Note: It's finally done! I'm really sad to be saying goodbye to Alina and Levi but they are off on their next grand adventure together. I need to say a HUGE thank you to the other amazing mind control authors who allowed me to cameo some of their own clever MC creations in this silly story...

Cheers to you Limerick and The Sympathetic Devil. My sincerest thanks to Nadia Nightside, Kris P Kreme and Neil Bimbeau. You are all erotica superstars in my eyes and I wouldn't be writing today if not for your exemplary examples.

Thanks for sticking with the story. If you enjoyed it then please let me know. We hobby writers thrive on your feedback, comments and PMs. Otherwise, cheers and happy reading!

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MenoetesMenoetes18 days agoAuthor

Thanks for the kind words, Mike. Levi and Alina hold a special place in my heart as the favourite couple I have written to date. It was a sad moment, sending them off to a new future together but felt like the right place to end it. 😊

Mike_StandMike_Stand18 days ago

Just wonderful. This is going straight to my favourites.

I would have liked to see Levi out and about more, and not just interacting primarily with Alina. I wanted him to be alert and independent, and not dazed and confused like he often was.

Nonetheless, very well written and there was variety in the characters. I wish I could write something this good!

It's annoying to wrap up a story nicely and still have people asking for more. And yet, Russia does sound like a potential new level to this story with the opportunity to extend the arcs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A good ending to the story.

wayward_driverwayward_driverabout 2 months ago

Such a great and fun read. Thanks!!

Damonkey916Damonkey9163 months ago

I normally despise “bimbo” stories, but I could not stop reading this one. The intrigue of Alina’s backstory kept me going. I definitely would love a second “book” of The Widow’s Gift in Russia. The current ending is a teetering cliffhanger daring the author to continue. Please, if you love your readers, continue this story.

geek_writergeek_writer5 months ago

Well crafted tale that took me on a journey. Very cool indeed.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This is interesting and could be longer in length if the author ever cares to give more drawn out experiences to the changes taking place:

Could have a chapter or two of Levi being emotional abused by his mother. She could fulfil the consuming mother role who controls Levi with emotional extortion and publicly humiliates him for his weakness. A boy doesn't become afraid of beautiful women out of bo where.

You could also include more of Kimmy acting as antagonist for our hero to overcome, with Alina doing more to qualify Levi as worthy of her gifts. This would make the changes Levi undergoes more his own choice, even if unrealized.

Just more experiences from Levi with real affection for Alina would be good.

That said, this author has a fascinating focus on describing fashion. Pretty different from other things on here, was kinda cool to read. Even for a man who gets buy with a white tee and blue jeans in tennis shoes I got from Costco.

MenoetesMenoetes8 months agoAuthor

@TxCelt - "A post-grad level course in alliteration" may be the kindest feedback I have received yet! I do love toying with words. Language is a playground, go out and romp!

TxCeltTxCelt9 months ago

The one-shot about settling into Russia absolutely has my vote!

That is, if course, if we can't have a continuing series. I could see it staying non-political by focusing on the individuals who they would be after and their crimes, and the transformation of Britney to a redeemed character, but that's just me trying to drag out a story that I really, really liked.

A very well told tale ( and a post-grad level course in alliteration) Thanks for sharing it.

MenoetesMenoetes10 months agoAuthor

@Whacky76 - Ha! I loved Warehouse 13 and can see the prurient parallels now you mention it. But as I have said before, this particular tale ends here. If I were to write more in this setting it, would either be a short one-shot about Levi, Alina and the rest of the harem settling into their new life in Russia, or a whole new tale set decades after these events with a whole new cast. Thanks so much for reading and leaving such kind, encouraging comments! I appreciate it.

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