All Comments on 'The Wife Swop'

A fine example of 'be careful what you wish for' :)

Way too contrived. Although I usually like your writings, this one just came off as fake.

Good turnabout story.

Very enjoyable take on the cheating wife/husband work affair. Especially liked the twist around at the ending.

Good one Satin

4.5/5

Keep them comming!

Excellent! 5*. BTW, sole mates are a couple with a mutual foot fetish! Lol

Cookingwithgas

Excellent!

‘Alpha Male’ bullshit is just that… bullshit.

I appreciated the ‘good life’ ending for Rob and Amanda.

This was a fast, streamlined simple story. Easy to identify with, well paced, and was emotion provoking.

I believe the spelling is swap not swop. Either way be careful what you wish for.

Good story. 5 stars. I enjoy your stories. Yes you misspell a word or two but it doesn’t distract from the story. Keep writing

I think ypu need to slow down on the number of ermm 'stories"? You are uploading, take more time on just trying to write a decent one.

-1 star

I gave this story a good strong 4 *. It would have been 5, but for one misspelled word, many many times. Swap is the correct word. Not s w o p.

A flat BTB with a rushed ending.

I liked it. Karma serving up the best outcome possible. )

My momma used to tell me be careful what you ask for- you might just get it! )

Ah! There was a good story in there but it needed a better execution

Even though it was predictable I loved it. 5

I liked it. George and Donna got what they deserved, and Rob and Amanda got the happy ending. Simple, straightforward and just. 5*****

Non Bueno.

Good stuff, 5 stars. Thanks for posting.

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By the way:

"swop" should be "swap."

"sole" mates should be "soul" mates.

There's a few more, but not too bad. I enjoyed the story.

Predictable. Not in a good way.

I liked it and rated it 5*. A fine example of the Spanish saying "ir a por lana y salir trasquilado". Well done.

Liked it.... one of my favorite authors on here.

Happily ever after. And cheaters get their just reward. thanks

I do not understand why Amanda married George or Rob married Donna. There did not seem any reason for either marriage. The lack of connection in the original marriages made for an easy, but average, story.

It's shameful to publish this in LW.

It should be in SF or humor.

Everyone knows and proclaims it though, there's nothing better than a big dick.

It makes every woman lose her panties, married or not, happy or not, sexual or not......

It would be nice to publish an official denial, otherwise all normally endowed men are going to get a swelling head.

Blah blah get an editor and quit abusing your readers. It started with a misspelled title and went down hill from there.

Well done !

I liked it! Nice story. Would've been nice to draw it out a bit more and show the interaction with the inevitable divorcing couples....

A wonderful and poignant story. Well done! Amy x

Loved it! Great Story!!

it's ok not to write a story, if you're not really going to put your best out there.

Gave it a 2/5. I'm sorry to say, the whole thing was so "by the book" that I'd rate it as average... but the typos and mix-ups of the characters' names pushed it down.

I mean, seriously, either "consoling" in UK English means something else than in US English, or the "cheaters" are just too comically cliché. It felt like these people say and do things because the author needed them to for the plot, not because there was an actual story to tell.

After all the recent stories from this author seeking out new and interesting angles this one was rather predictable.

I'm sure it was accidental but, Donna telling Rob they were sole mates had me laughing. So, their feet were compatible???

Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating.

OK now that the rating is out of the way. I have to say thanks for generating so many comments form those who consumed this tale. They are just as diverse and interesting to consume. There are 29 at present. Some of them are funny to read. Others make me wonder who wrote them and if they read the same tale.

While I know we all have different points of view (POV) on swapping and cheating spouses. It is funny when you see them published as comments. I don’t begrudge anyone their POV on a tale. To me those comments are what assist authors/writers/creators of these tales, we so eagerly consume, in order to shape their future products. Using these comments gives them the ability to mold and shape them in ways that we can enjoy.

Satin thanks for this one. I am truly looking forward to your future products for us.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

it has been done before but most every new one has pretty much done the same, Never-the-less I enjoyed it. Thanks...SK742

Swap

I enjoyed it. Predictable, but so is much fiction. Easy five.

There seemed a lack of emotion in this story, Hubby rolled over too quickly in agreeing to the swap, surely he would have put up more of an argument rather than just being a pussycat. He was very weak and had little or no self respect.

Good story gave it a five. I usually enjoy your work and have never left you a negative comment and probably never will. I generally read stories that rate four or better, If I get through a quarter or half page and don't like the story I stop reading it. If I don't finish it I am not comfortable passing a comment to others.

I always appreciate the arrogant scumbag getting humbled. Thanks

This is a good story, but I have one objection: shouldn't Rob have told his wife the swap was a deal breaker ahead of time? How was he undecided? The other view is to let her kill her marriage as a test and be done with her, but he seems to be filled with indecision.

I like this one. Thank you.

"Feel free to console each other" = the end

Nicely told. For me, wife-swapping is a nonstarter except as a prelude to divorce. Once you have decided to split and remove your emotional commitment to her, then who cares - as long as it's mutually consensual? Rob and Amanda had pretty much had it with their selfish spouses, so the timing of the swap was great for them. That said, the idea of wife-swapping when you actually are still in love with your spouse is completely foreign to me. For me, swingers and swappers have a "Lesser" relationship than I would want. I understand it works for some of them and if it's mutual, then to each his own. Thanks, SD, enjoyed it.

to Just_Words, I agree, even if she was being a selfish bitch and showed no interest in his opinion, Rob owed it to her to be completely honest about his feelings.-Not that that would have stopped her.

Not a bad tale but it felt predetermined and unemotional. There were assumptions on the part of the characters that were never stated.

Not bad. Just didn’t catch any emotion for me.

Thanks for all of the feedback, most of it is really helpful. I will endeavour to improve. Sorry I dropped some biggies in this one.

Just for info: Swap Or Swop – Do They Mean the Same?

The term “swap” means to make an exchange, giving something in a trade to receive something else, or switching something for another. “Swop” is also a word, sharing the same meaning, however, the use of this term is generally only seen and used by UK residents.

How do you continuously misspell "swap" like that without ever questioning whether You've got it wrong? You'd think autocorrect would've stepped in at some point.

That's what I call a happy ending.

Thanks @satindesires

This story reflects reality. Donna realized she was selfish, and not the better person. But she couldn't do the hard work to change. She was set in her ways. It's why most people leave cheaters and abusers, because change is unlikely.

Also it's spelled swap and swapping.

I think you meant to write "swap" and not swop. So much for spellchecking. That alone dropped the score a point. Then the silliness of the story dropped it even further. Better luck on the next one.

Considering that it is the main idea of your story, you should at least try to spell that word correctly. It's "swap," not "swop."

What's the deal with the swap/swop thing? Very distracting. Sometimes you got it right and sometimes you didn't.

Interesting story…generally well written. But one changes tack (as in sailing), not tact. And there’s something fishy about sole mates (soul). Adverse/averse.

Contrived? Yes

Characters acting stupidly? Yes

Morality? None?

Rating 4? Are you kidding even a zero is to high.

Recommendation? Don't waste your time!!!

Seen this before but well done. Ending was rushed. Well worth the time. Thank you.

Some bitches are just plain dumb. Donna didn't have a brain in her head. Nice story!

Nice story. Well done. Having a big penis doesn't make a man a better lover or the sex better, in the same way that driving a bus is not as much fun as driving a much smaller sport car. The truth is vaginas are expected to widen, not lengthen. Thanks for the story.

Just anoher story where the poor husband lost his wife, but he found the love of hi slife and lived happily ever after. The poor wife lost everything. Next time, save your ink.

Liked it. The 2 insufferable, arrogant, & disrespcting people to their spouses losing not only their almost demanded night together - well, George enjoyed it but Donna didn't - but also their marriages. Along the way, Amanda & Rob gained love & each other. Shows that one should be careful what one wishes for. 4 stars Bob

"she is about to experience a consummate lover" - Guys with big cocks don't tend to be "consummate lovers," because they don't think they have to be.

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"George and I are just so well matched, we need to explore being together." - If they know that they're so well matched, why do they have to "explore?" Just get divorced and marry each other.

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"It all started when George and Donna met through work" - That's a single sentence and needs a period, it doesn't flow cleanly into the next part.

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If George is such a great lover, why is Amanda so willing to swap him?

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"changing tact" - Tack. It's a sailing term, look it up.

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"I'd like to apologise for our behaviour tonight; I am truly sorry." - It would obviously kill the story, but if they're really sorry, then stop!

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"that bloody unshakeable sense of fairness was a complete pain in the arse" - Excuse him for wanting things to be fair.

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"She suggested it to George..." This paragraph is one long comma splice of a sentence, should be at least two if not three sentences.

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"which she wore with a bodice" - A bodice is the upper part of a dress, do you mean "bustiere?"

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A "cottage" doesn't seem like an appropriate venue for stockings and heels.

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"she consoled herself with the fact Rob was completely devoted to her." - Yeah, just like she's completely devoted to him, right?

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"George suggested Rob and Amanda might like to take a stroll down to the lake. She looked at Rob who nodded softly." - They shouldn't be taking George's suggestions, they should just go to Amanda's bedroom.

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"Amanda will be eager to get back to a real man." - Nothing like a big ego! Rob isn't a "real man" because he doesn't have a horse cock?

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"sole mates" - "soul"

Kinda like reading a Lifetime Movie. Zzzzzzzzz

Nicely written. Thanks for sharing- I enjoyed this.

very poor formula, just like Rob and Amanda we deserve better, especially from you.

You stated you ran a spell check. At the least you should have decided on which way you were going to spell swop/swap. You had both.

As for the story, it was rather unimpressive. Based on how you portrayed Rob, it was hard to understand how he would allow this relationship to go this far.

2/5 stars and that was being generous.

No surprises here, everything was telegraphed from the first sentence.

Average plot. At any point if Rob had said no, it might have been better, but he just was so wishy washy.

a little rushed at the end but still a good read

Enjoyed the story.

A less drastic version of the 'mess around and find out' trope. Usually when someone has been messing around, they or someone else, ends up bleeding. Those responsible for upsetting the kettle deserve to be burned. The outcome of this story was plausible and enjoyable as it didn't involve special forces, government organizations, or advanced martial arts. 5

It was ok and l did enjoy it

Scores 3/5

Okay...3*

Enjoyed the story. One question, what is a "sole mate"? Is that like those gel shoe inserts or something? I believe you meant soul mate. :)

Loved the story.

Good story!

4

You misspelled the title, and the intro.

That's as far as I got.

0 stars.

Resorting to the Merriam Webster website I see that "swop" is the British English spelling of the American "swap".

Even though it was predictable, I liked it mostly. Lots of editing mistakes, the misspelled words were funny.

One arrogant and one good person make life good till the arrogant person finds another arrogant. Both arrogants together torment good persons.. It is rare that two good people join and get rid of arrogants together and make each other's life beautiful.

Liked it 4*. If not quite so predictable ending 5*

You know, I used to swop my wife. She'd get home from work, I'd bend her over the sofa, and "swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop swop" (etc.) until she came.

One day, she left me for an English professor. I never understood why.

1 star - no likeable characters and a lame plot.

Although, the SLUT and ASSHOLE got exactly what they deserved.

Swop is the UK English word that is spelled SWAP in NA English.

When does the sole, become a soul?

Have a nice day.

"George's comments about his wife wanting a big cock and Donna saying it was inevitable irritated Rob."

So, what is a swop?

Really enjoyed this story, though, to Regguy69’s and Just_Words’ points, it wasn’t perfect. On that note, I think Rob didn’t draw the line earlier in the story because he secretly or subconsciously wanted out of the relationship with Donna. Rather than do the heavy lifting himself, let her make the case for him. Sounds like a case of giving your enemy just enough rope to hang themselves. My one nit about this story is the quick epilogue at the end. Even though it read like an after thought, I think it actually took a lot away from the value of the story. Still 5* though.

I understand the premise, I really do. I also understand where you were trying to go with this. The problem is that no swapping couples go into it being browbeaten into it. Having been in the lifestyle for more than a decade, this is not even close to how the dynamic works. Also, it's SWAP, not SWOP.

Donna didn't realise that as soon as she touched George's dick, she was damage goods and a divorce was inevitable. She was already playing with fire when she started flirting with the asshole.

A nice story of consequences. I'm glad it worked out for the good spouses, and the selfish ones ended up miserable.

Very good story. Erotic, romantic, and a cautionary tale all rolled into one. I am interested in whether Rob and Amanda succeed as a couple. You could probably extend this into a novel by chronicling the friendships and the nuptial relationships of the two couples leading up to this core event and then progress the relationship developing between Rob and Amanda amidst the divorces. Do Rob and Amanda find bliss in the wake of this? We want to know.

To us Brits swop is the correct spelling, although we will tolerate either.

As for the stoty I will give it 4****, as it was interesting although Rob should have been less indecisive and more up front with Donna.

Other than that, it is nice to see (read0 arrogant assholes being taken down a peg.

For record I am a published non-fiction writer.

For once, and actual real depiction of having a big dick but no skills in the bedroom.

@satindesires, if swop is the UK spelling and you are from the UK, use that one. I am an editor (I've edited a couple of mainstream works seeking publication and am registered here to edit work on literotica, too). If you want to extend this into a novel as I suggested earlier and maybe add more emotional impact on the characters, I would be happy to work with you to make your very good story even better.

i do like a good swopping story lol

I was turned off by the "swop" rather than "swap".....from there it usually indicates numerous spelling errors and grammatical errors are sure to plague the story itself!!!

Had potential but flopped half way through and nose dived at the end.

@satindesires commented:

"Just for info: Swap Or Swop – Do They Mean the Same?

The term “swap” means to make an exchange, giving something in a trade to receive something else, or switching something for another. “Swop” is also a word, sharing the same meaning, however, the use of this term is generally only seen and used by UK residents.

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To wit:

Satin, thanks for the tutorial in English/Ameicanlish colloquialisms. I can recall being confronted with an Englishwoman screaming, "You're ripping me," in a moment of passion ... and me pulling out in a moment of concern while asking, "Are you OK?" ... only to be met by eyes of female indignation demanding to know why I had ceased penetration while she was on the cusp of having "arrived".

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Brits, Americans ... we do not share a common language.

2 pages for a plot like that. ur stories are too short and dont contain very much. like an outline of a plot

are u spelling swap wrong on purpose or is swop some type of fetish? like someone swopping into a marriage and steeling the partner

Don’t it always seem to go…

I loved this one! Too bad I can only give it 5 stars

The grass is always greener.........psych. Saw this coming from the start. Someone should have clued Georgy in to the fact that if the only one that thinks your an alpha is you, then it's not you! moron

Not very creative ... plot is linear.

3*