All Comments on 'The Wife,The Princess,The Slut Ch. 01'

by madscot80

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
i like it

needs work on punctuation so its easier to follow, but not a bad story, id like to see it continued

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Nice Story

Too many loose ends you need to Follow-Up on Nancy and how the others are Involved. as a Group, Individually.

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