All Comments on 'The Wild Walk'

Good story, but you need an editor

A superb first story. A normally shy woman getting carried away in public -- great story and written well.

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Although there were numerous language errors (you obviously are not from the U.S.), I really enjoyed the story, it had a different twist to it. I would suggest a bit of editing by someone who has English as their first language. Winner of a take though.

My wife found this and we both enjoyed it. It was hot that both tourists, man and wife, got fucked that night. Wives generally like to see their husbands sodomized, and my wife is no exception.

Nice story!