by roseyfingers
Well done and 5 stars of intriguing drama and interesting plot that is fun to read with the current political world climate. Fun top shelf entertainment. So keep rocking them on. Cheers.
Interesting world building especially as the early chapters felt a little one dimensional. The only I would critique is that the over the top parody might be laid on a little thick and can be distracting from the actual story.
The police being in on it is real subtle and genuine. They definitely would be in real life. Especially in America.
Lens is going to end up on a boat and it won’t just be to visit lmao. Wonder if she’ll cross paths with Angela again.