All Comments on 'The Will of Miss Jaqueline'

Dashe surrendered too quickly. Otherwise, well written

A nice little, short story. To make it a bit more interesting I would have edged her a few more times before stopping altogether. Afterwards I would have put her in a cage with her arms shackled behind her. The next day the edging would begin until she passes out with frustration. Maybe that next night, Jacqueline comes in with Dasha blindfolded and gives Dasha the relief she wanted. Like I said, this was a nice loving story. Perhaps another chapter or two?

Nice premise.

Interesting scenario.

Don't understand why he didn't force her to play with his cock and balls -- and imaginw how good it was going to be when he put his cock in her pussy.

And I don't understand why she didn't really give him a blowjob.

And some more pussy teasing and edging without permitting her to orgasm...

And, perhaps, at least playing with her asshole if not fingering it..

Four stars.