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gizzmo301over 19 years agoOk
A well written story, a great love story between good friends. Very good detail
Anonymousover 19 years agoVery good story, the narration is excellent...
Very good story, the narration is excellent... keep writing...
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoWonderful !!!
Beautifully written, I Loved it ! Eagerly awating for your next one .
Anonymousover 11 years agovery believable
Nice and slow, good build up, hard to believe you are a physics and math guy, you could write as a pro.
The young boys thoughts and feelings were brought out very nicely.
Keep it up.
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