All Comments on 'The World Turns'

nice story

Excellent concept and written beautifully. The dichotomy between what they knew and what they now felt was so real by your explanation which also made it even hotter. That sex scene pushed my imagination into a new territory as I have always wondered about the differences and now I feel like I have more information regarding not just the differences but what could also be considered the same. Great piece of story telling.

Wow! Thank you to whoever you are who left the anonymous comment for such high praise!

Extremely well done. I agree with Anonymous about the play and shifting between the different viewpoints and even the contrast of ebbing and flowing feelings within their own bodies. Surely, one of the more imaginative and well thought out (or intuited) stories on Lit. I just finished story 1 and look forward to the next three. 5 stars and fave and following.

@Arsenique Thanks! Hope you enjoy the rest of the series! I'm working on more.