by Jugg_Head
I’ve been anxiously awaiting this chapter. Slow burn is definitely an apt descriptor.
The slow burn is more of a near-smokeless smolder with this chapter. I had hoped for a bit more resolution, but we got an increase in the cluelessness on the part of the primary characters. Also slightly disappointed in only two pages, but we're beggars and cannot be too critical. I know it's not easy to write, and we all appreciate your efforts.
I love the slowness, and the story keeps progressing. This is my favorite story to follow. Keep up the great work!