All Comments on 'The Zebra and The Hyenas'

Would love to get sequel. Maybe a story of Ricky taking out his anger on someone who could have confirmed who bullied him, but instead she stayed silent to protect herself.

I would absolutely love a sequel to this story. I want Eric to humiliate her.

this is perfect example of a masterpiece

Need more please !

It's pretty good! Writing is a bit flat, but the subject matter makes up for it. I like the fantasies the protagonist has though I feel the characters could do with more personality. Adding some description of what people and things look like would also greatly improve your story!

Very good story - I identified easily with the nerds, the misery. I can add to the line of comments - what about a follow-up? I am already fantasizing about the misery of Alice…

I could see the Basketball team and Cheerleaders trapping Ricky and her in the gym, stripping them and making them have sex on camera.