All Comments on 'Their First Play Date'

Great story so far, but a little more background on the feature couple would of been great. But that is only me.

Thankyou for sharing your talent and look foreward to many more installments on this couples adventures.

I feel certain You know what I mean. Questions have arisen as have feelings.

Not realy sure how I actually feel ... titilated and a little aroused .. but..

Lately, the relative absence of details of everyday life in Literotica stories - ie, doing the laundry, changing the sheets, actually procuring the food - has been a sore spot. It bugs both because otherwise hot stories without such details seem too unlikely, & also because, try as I might, I cannot imagine away my own laundry, making it too easy to dismiss some of the more challenging stories I read as "unrealistic." Thus my delight when reading your story! The juxtaposition of this wild (for this reader) dinner party & details like traffic on the 10, setting the timer on the washer so the jizzy dockers get put into the dryer, and The Subway Scene, is outstanding! I'm very impressed with your craft. Oh - and it was WAY HOT, too!

Not my taste or liking, but still a five star story. I will give future Scorpio's BDSM stories a wide berth, but do admire the character development in this one.