All Comments on 'These Violent Delights Pt. 01'

Too short.

I would have liked to read more in this context. I like the way you think.

@Anon I am working on another part to this, it was meant to be a tease, a build-up just like in the story.

@Anon I am working on more, this was meant to be a tease and build you up just like in the story.

Breathtakingly beautiful. I love your writing style as well as your definition of BDSM. Whilst I agree that it was a short story/ instalment it was very obviously a reflection of the events in the story. A very easy 5 stars from me. Simply put it was perfect. It left no room for doubts about his motives and his experience which is an absolute blessing.

Thank you for sharing! I’m just going to check on your other submissions.

Tess (uk)

@Tess Thank you, I am glad that I got across what I was trying to while writing this.