All Comments on 'Third Wheel Renter Pt. 03'

by Luccstar025

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zena99zena99almost 3 years ago

Loved this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love the story but would recommend getting an editor, there a lot of typos and soke spelling mistakes.

That said i gave it a 5/5

Luccstar025Luccstar025almost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for liking my story! Life got busy and I had been sitting with the half finished version of this for a while. I considered rushing the ending but decided to hold off. I am hoping to conclude this in the next installment. I do have some other projects that I am working on. So it may be a while.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great chapter and would love to see an even better ending. With the conclusion of this series do you plan to tie up your other story as well in the brown mare? I love both and would love to see them get the ending they deserve

Luccstar025Luccstar025almost 3 years agoAuthor

I hope too. Much like this chapter I have a half finished Brown Mare script that I had to put down. I really need to plan out where I am going with that one or it will get too complicated and loses focus.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great chapter! Very much a fan of this series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I am checking nearly every week if you released the final chapter. Can't wait!

One of my Favorite Stories of this year so far!!

ConstructiveConstructiveover 1 year ago

Still waiting on part 4 afraid it'll never come...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn just found this story only to see it doesn't have an ending... what a shame

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