All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 11'

This series just gets hotter and hotter!

WOW, chapter #11 stirred so many emotions in me. It brought back memories of some of my own long forgotten experiences. Particularly that feeling of near collapse as your pulse beats so loudly in your head that it blocks out the surrounding sounds. And that feeling of total subserviency as bystanders watch you sucking someone's cock. Can't wait to see what happens next in chapter #12. MLF

I cannot believe I stumbled upon your stories just today. The fact I just finished the latest one should tell you I am really enjoying them. OMG, the scenes of being exposed are too much! Clearly Lewis will be involved more and has to be wondering about Dave. But being fully exposed as a cocksucker to Mr. Ali was the ultimate! Keep writing!

This series is so hot. Waiting for Lewis to watch Coach and David mess around. That will be hot!

Superb story many thanks I love the bit when he was staring at Mr Ali whilst cleaning Phillips cock clean so humiliating

I hope next time he’s made to suck him off as well....