All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 24'

David's mind wasn't the only one that was going into overdrive. This chapter was an absolute rollercoaster ride of building up tension and then releasing it over and over again. WOW! Great job!

I completely concur with MarcLuciFer. Reminded me so much of a plethora of embarrassing moments I've experienced, some of which, looking back on it, I've deliberately but unconsciously instigated! We must share a similar gene pool because it invariably caused me to cum in explosive bucket loads that coated me and everything around me. My mind has always been swimming in sexual thoughts that cause me to throw boners at the most awkward moments as well. This episode has had my heart palpitating pumping blood to my extremities.

@MarcLuciFer and DevonCowboy.

Wow. Thank you so much for the comments. Really good to hear you’re enjoying what I write.