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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This is good but you really could use an editor. "Over road" and other mistakes were confusing.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I agree. Spelling and grammar are poor throughout. But the story is very good. Please continue with more chapters.

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I decided to share some stories I have written. Feel free to contact me Michael.Kross1313@gmail.com I lost my motivation for a while. I am not exactly sure why I did. I just did not care anymore. However, I checked on my account recently and had a lot of requests to finish...

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