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by Dazman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
OK but -

This is an okay story, but one thing I find offputing is the desperate attempt to find every possible word to reference both pussy and arse.

Story will flow much better if you just say "arse" instead of "dirt box" for example.

diamondphdiamondphabout 4 years ago

Dirty, filthy sex as promised. Loved it!

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Many of my stories I have posted here have a basis in fact; events that have happened but have since been embellished, expanded and extended to make them what they are. Many of the resulting stories are fantasies that could have become reality but for the choices that either I...