All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 02'

Carrying on at just the right pace. Well done.

I agree !

Keep going just as you are.

I will enjoy reading this all over again, once it is fully out. Well done, thank you.

Stunningly sensual and impeccably well timed unfolding of this budding and touching relationship.

And still the clever, even goofy, bits: the sledge hammer 🔨 comment, the lasagna quip. Don’t lose those - or overdo them. They’re an essential part of your craft as an author.

Wow and wow again! I think Squareybob, below, says "it" admirably! Keep "it" going…