by 1NaughtyMaleNurse
Loved the story. Great to get off to! Pity you don't edit it better - so many spelling mistakes that can create strange pictures - for example you frequently have loads of seamen leaking out of various holes - the word is semen :) Seamen are sailors - quite the image!
So not bad bad I think you could use an editor. I still can’t figure out why lighters of these stories have to keep reminding us that the woman is married, and that she has a tight, white Cunt, so unnecessary. I think we all know that she is married from reading the very first chapter.