by Winter_Fare
I liked it but also felt that it was really weird if that makes any sense. I thought the story was well written but the pass out and 3 hrs missing was a little much to swallow. I think it needs another chapter so that see goes and sees this woman again wo an invite. Just to get an explanation. That's just my 2 cents worth.
5/5
J
Thanks for the feedback, J ♥️
Watch this space!
Hoping to submit the next part this weekend xxx
Intriguing storyline with intriguing characters; cannot help but love Lucy. Not sure where you are going, but it is quite obvious you enjoy a vivid imagination. Looking forward. Like it.