All Comments on 'Three Hours'

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used2bjustjused2bjustjabout 2 years ago

I liked it but also felt that it was really weird if that makes any sense. I thought the story was well written but the pass out and 3 hrs missing was a little much to swallow. I think it needs another chapter so that see goes and sees this woman again wo an invite. Just to get an explanation. That's just my 2 cents worth.

5/5

J

Winter_FareWinter_Fareabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback, J ♥️

Watch this space!

Hoping to submit the next part this weekend xxx

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Intriguing storyline with intriguing characters; cannot help but love Lucy. Not sure where you are going, but it is quite obvious you enjoy a vivid imagination. Looking forward. Like it.

FirstClassFlirtFirstClassFlirtabout 2 years ago

Certainly intriguing and glad there’s already a part two waiting!

Nicole2023Nicole2023about 1 year ago

Ok I need to see where it’s going…I,m interested

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