All Comments on 'Three in a Row - Afterwards Pt. 01'

Author wrote about a couple in love that remained in love and considerate of each other as they experiment and expand their sexual experiences.

Husband character is written as very considerate and caring to the point he allows wife to achieve sexual high with others.

Wife was written as loving but naturally selfish as she experienced higher sexuality than possible with her husband.

Husband was written to be more accepting of this with less anxiety and jealousy than I would experience. So I accepted the fantasy and the writing was well done so I just enjoyed it.

Nice that this chapter gave balance to husband getting a very special birthday present. Author did a great job writing wife’s jealousy over husband’s extra marital sex.

I am glad author did not move wife into lesbian sex or husband into gay sex. Husband as written was very close to gay or could have been a true cuck.

Not bad, just not hot or engaging.

Another pimp and his slut wife. What's interesting or entertaining about that? The writing was neither clever or original. The marriage is over except for the lawyers. They are such unlikable characters that they could have died and nobody would care.

1 star

Having done the Three in a Row series I had two questions,

(1) What happened next?

(2) What did she think of it?

So I asked her.

Anon/"Garbage" post 1/15/2018

Why do you guys read stories like this? It was well done but it clearly involves cuckolding. Guys like you read it (or maybe not) and give it 1 Star and then dump all over it, same way every time. If you are such a defender of moral men and women, what in the world are you doing on a porn story site? You and your ilk are a waste of space.

Good story; I gave it 5 stars.

He posts the same tired stuff over and over. One can only hope for an aneurysm to save us from his worn out b.s.

Where was my comment on this story? Like you, I didn't read it. Unlike your cowardly ass, I didn't comment on it.

You make yourself look dumber every day. For someone who claims to have not posted a comment, you made it a point to come back and check on it. So you see, it’s clear you came back to check on your standard “garbage” comment and to probably post one of your classic “cuck shit” classics. You really prove your stupidity daily. No wonder everyone thinks you’re a joke.

Really enjoyed this..but also appreciated that husband and wife communicated.. no behind the back fucking or cheating... and both were always present

Very Good epilogue series to this story and enjoy the female prospective. It was interesting and understandable to see “The Wife” becoming friends with Sarah and then how Sally was introduced and how the wife’s inner thoughts of allowing him to experience another woman worked in very well. Yes, her jealousy is understandable and that he had gotten over that after or during their first threesome that included him. Thank You and looking forward to reading the next 2 chapters.

Just read it for the first time and have had no previous exposure to this author.

Two aspects:

1. the writing (composition) would easily compare favorably with any produced in "Writers' Workshops", so the nuts and bolts of construction get a solid positive evaluation.

2. the psychology of the main characters is logical and believable for long-term married couples who have deep love for each other and an acceptance of deviations from the inhibited puritanical strictures of our national psyche as being both normal for human beings and essentially strengthening to a relationship when there is thorough communication and consistent supportive behavior backing up that communication.

Liked it. Look forward to the sequels.

MLJ