All Comments on 'Thursdays with Summer Pt. 01'

Great start to a great series, looking forward to more. :D

Fun start and potential for much much more! 🔥🔥

Good start - well written, and interesting Main Character - what's next?

Had enough punctuation problems on the first Page. Periods, commas, none at all...

Good first story, loads of potential! Looking forward to part 2!

Great first story! Keep it up, I can’t wait to read more!

Thank you for all the feedback I’ve had so far, it’s really inspiring to see a first ever effort be well received. I have begun work on the next chapter and have planned out the framework to make it at least a 10 part series as it stands.

Read until practice & the run-on sentences.