All Comments on 'Tiffany and Mike'

Great start, can't wait to read the next chapter! Speaking of which, it would be nice if they were a little longer.

Never ever let a bitch cage you.

She didn´t feel like a bitch. I hope it stays that way ^^

Fun story. I hope there is more to come.

Great start. And "Pinterest" is a great answer. Bravo!

A question from me, and a prayer from me.

The question is this: did Mike, being an alpha male who is proud of his own success, perhaps take advantage of the Bet to make a mistake on purpose, and be "forced" into submission? In other words: maybe Mike craves submission, maybe Mike "desired" to wear a chastity cage?

My prayer is this. A head cheerleader is a successful girl, by definition. Nothing against that although, like all people, upon closer inspection she too has her own insecurities, fears, anxieties and weaknesses. Please don't reduce this whole thing to trite cuckolding after sissification--that's too cliché and stereotypical. It would be nice to read the development of a dominant woman who does not feel the need to cheat him.

Short chapters or short chapters doesn't matter to me, but we all hope that the frequency doesn't have a slow pace.

Boy I sure hope this isn't a one and done story, because it such a good start to a good story..

I agree with the comment od Norway_1705. Don't let this drop into the typical and cliche story. Great start so far, maybe could have added a bit more of the background of how they found themselves kinky. Better than many out there already.

I can't wait for more chapters!

oohh good start. excited to see where this goes.

Interesting premise.

But what sex there is nothing more than an outline. Totally lacking in details.

Two stars.