Awesome story. Take your time writing. Enjoy! My opinion… don’t have things progress too fast. The build up and anticipation is the best part to me. Every tiny step in the right direction needs to be explored and written about.
Just a guy looking to share some enjoyment with others. Chapter 2 had a better reception, so I appreciate your patience as I incorporate feedback in Ch 3! I do have an outline through Chapter 30, and drafts through Chapter 7, but send me messages on where you want to see Tif...